Everyone swoons
When they look at the moon
Sky full of stars
Roads full of cars
People are always moving.
Just like what they're viewing
The sky never stops.
People on rooftops
Appreciate the night
All the natural lights
End rhyme, euphony, end-stopped line
This poem is fire! I love the end rhymes in this, it really helped the poem flow.
ReplyDeleteI really like how this poem flows and you rhymed it really well. Good job.
ReplyDeleteThe rhymes you used were very good! I like how the poem flows and the words you used!
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